This is actually the week 6 format but for some reason it didn't post so I'm posting it for my week 6. I enjoyed the parameters I just hope I nailed them all. I used an alternating syllabic pattern of 8-9-8-9.
Crabapple Trees my Dad Planted
Spiderwebs collect and reflect the
morning dew. I am sure they would
shimmer if it wasn't overcast.
Continue through the woods. I shake
with the leaves, with wind, with the birds.
My natural polyrhythm.
My shoes soak up the puddles wrung out
from the greys and the whites above
I knew I should have worn socks today.
Doesn't matter, I'm almost there.
Three crabapple trees my dad planted
petitioning the sky's color.
Grasses converging into carpet --
Fabric samples try to mimic
these textures, this apparatus.
My Sherwin Williams, my Blooming--
Look! The Cherokee Rose is Blooming!
Grandma says it's our state flower.
Friends call me the modern day Huck Finn.
Usually, I think they are right.
The sun blasts through the quilt of greys and whites,
this afternoon, I'll nap outside.
Thursday, October 13, 2011
Thursday, October 6, 2011
Sign Inventory - Theodore Roethke's "The Waking"
-Formal structure
-6 stanzas, first five stanzas are 3 lines and the last one is four.
-each line has ten syllables
-Lyrical
-repititon of the last words of lines; know, go, slow.
-Closely resembles a sestina
-also resembles the recursive method in practice
-All lines capitalized
-Present tense
Junkyard Quotes Week 6
•Hung from a wrecking ball to see a fashion show.
•There's a monster in my room, we discussed movies over coffee.
•The walls have teeth.
•I am the daughter of 18-Wheelers.
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